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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 5 62.50%
wayne back 3 37.50%
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 05-18-04, 07:51 PM   #17
FLooZe
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ok,heres the breakdown

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ:real hot verse,good wordplay,your flow had me wondering at times,your structure couldve had more time spent on it i think.
best line:dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication
good lines,but rough flow and structure.i liked it because you had alot of the same words rhyming almost perfectly.
worst line:You'll be dead for it - endure it
Morbid cold like Nordic
The hydrochloric - pour it
very short,doesnt really fit in with the rest of the long lines,but its pretty decent
work on:you need to work very hard on your structure,no doubt about that,um your flow could use some smoothing up,but apart from that,your fine.
overall vote: 8.5/10

wayne backk,right from the beginning it was obvious your verse wasnt up to toxics,you had better flow,less personels,but some good disses,and your bars were pretty decent too.
best line:tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections
thats a good personel,good structure,um pretty good wordplay,real good line
worst line:im ferocious with lyrical potent notions for wannabe votin coaches
couldn t knock me out with punches if ya slippin me sleepin potionscome on
this line has good strucure and flow,but its sucks hard.i mean,it barely rhymes,or im just too blind to notice the rhyming.
work on: your wordplay and disses.
overall vote:6/10

FINAL VOTE: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

reasonm for vote:he just had the upper hand.except for his flow and structure,he beat you in everything.
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