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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ |
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5 | 62.50% |
wayne back |
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3 | 37.50% |
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ok,heres the breakdown
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ:real hot verse,good wordplay,your flow had me wondering at times,your structure couldve had more time spent on it i think. best line:dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication good lines,but rough flow and structure.i liked it because you had alot of the same words rhyming almost perfectly. worst line:You'll be dead for it - endure it Morbid cold like Nordic The hydrochloric - pour it very short,doesnt really fit in with the rest of the long lines,but its pretty decent work on:you need to work very hard on your structure,no doubt about that,um your flow could use some smoothing up,but apart from that,your fine. overall vote: 8.5/10 wayne back ![]() best line:tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections thats a good personel,good structure,um pretty good wordplay,real good line worst line:im ferocious with lyrical potent notions for wannabe votin coaches couldn t knock me out with punches if ya slippin me sleepin potionscome on this line has good strucure and flow,but its sucks hard.i mean,it barely rhymes,or im just too blind to notice the rhyming. work on: your wordplay and disses. overall vote:6/10 FINAL VOTE: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ reasonm for vote:he just had the upper hand.except for his flow and structure,he beat you in everything.
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