lil trip - okay verse....u had bad flow b/c of stretched lines...your punches were okay in place but others were wack....work on using more and better meta's....use personals....not good wordplay on this verse so elevate there...this was ur best bar....
Lets step up the skill, show me some shit of yours above 3 syllables
yo lines are like you in this rap game, so fucking invisible
Verse Score - 6/10

shadows - good drop....better wordplay and flow...had a personal or two in there....some nice meta's....and all ur punches hit....i liked these two bars the best....
Clear to the rest of us though, shit’s pre-written
Drop my name once or twice… just so we don’t think them lines bitten
I mean shit, it’s clear I’m battling a square this time…
Because this kid got matched by a shadow with just 4 lines….
you had a more complex verse and thats why you got this...nice drop....

Vote - shadows edge

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