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NastyEm 5 83.33%
GKillaz05 1 16.67%
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Old 05-26-04, 04:13 AM   #16
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Flow: Nasty em, gkilla, ya flow was basic, not bad but basic, step it up a bit next time
Punches: Nasty em, gkilla once again basic. stuff like you should resign aint interesting to read. Be creative, like thr flame to ya ear line
Personals: G killa....It was a weak eprsonal (this guy wanted to battle set it up, went offline) but I think nastys only one was..you aint a killa...so as weak as it was ya took it
Multies: both of ya were lacking this, try and spit multies, it helps up your flow aswell
Vocab:Nasty em...I keep saying this..Gkilla...basic basic basic lol...Try using more complex vocab...nasty wasn't overally complex...but it was more complex then kilals verse
Originality: Nasty...the hot to def line, toilet bowl..shit everything..no originality shown in a basic verse nawmean so soz killa

Over all Nasty got this. Killa....step it up, I dnt no if thats ya best, but I'd work on more creative punches and complex vocab

Vote: Nasty
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