okay..mc's reaper...that wasn't a good verse...I mean you rhymed..and had structure but thats about it..you had no personals at all..and barely any decent hitting punchlines out of 50 I'd give you a 5...you need to elevate a lot more

Im too nice... I spit my own rhymes.. So y u pasteing and copying for?...
Talk hard when tha only 'JAIL' u seen was on 'MONOPLOY BOARDS!'//

Jae, your verse flowed a lot more smoothly, was a lot shorter, had better structure, and had better personals and punches...not to mention that line was fairly clever...good verse...you got my vote

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