aight battle....

legit votes speaks:
soul:~:
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personlas:6
punches:7
structure:6
creativity:5
vocab:6
thoughts: yor verse was not bad, had some good punches here and there, but i wusnt consistant with them, you needa have a nice flow... hittin puches ery line, more creativity... personals- some came but most lacked, aight verse = 30/50

killa:~:
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personals:7
punches:8
structure:6
creativity:6
vocab:6
thoughts: pretty good punches, you came consistant with them, they kept hitten for tha majority. i liked yor creativity just a lil more, you had a bit more similies and it wus a nice verse, pretty good verse = 33/50

vote: killa, consitant punches and more creativity...33/50
vote/ killah bwoy

return tha favor...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128836

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