Give Me FeedBack On This Real Quicck If You Have The Time!!! Appriciate It!!

Spit lyrics made of steal that are real~explicit,
No mind of my own thats just~pesitmistic,

You must bluff to the eyes of the~opponent,
For it to become the reason why you diss~own~it,

And have your heart~ready, your mind~steady,

Life untill death we breathe, think and feel until we~bleed,
Feel death's breath, breathing tightly, in a fucking bullet vest, time to feed?

We already have been reconceived of fire, Lye awake in await the messhiah,!
Street rhyming and gun firing is apart of these wabbabee's~lifestyle,

They all want respect as a ghetto trooper and be hustlin,
But there aint pride in a life of misery with to much pain & mind~Strugglin

Feeling misplaced world of hate, you should be anywhere but here,
I spit a comment face is oblique, got u running checking urself and tryna show no~fear,
We play at high bidz the result here is your table side is all cleared,

Foolishness got you stepping foot on the street,
Street rhyming again, still havent learned? now i must show you what you hid from which is 'defeat?',

Your lines and rhymes need more persistences,
You aint got time to be fucking with resistances,

Time is flying, there is no denying, it's harsh but true i will eliminate you,
This has similar aspects of a chess game, cause it's all about moves and this is 'Check-Mate' ...!!!!!!

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