If Nervez would have stopped trying to fill space wit his first lines in every bar, he wouldv gotten my vote. He said shit just cuz they sounded dangerouse and didn go too far. I dont look at structure but I guess his was Ok. his punches werent to good till he hit that Oprah shit. but It still did'nt hit his apponent, he just started a glorification thing. all in all, most of his verse was ok, just needs work.
BigChase gets my vote only becouse his opponent droped it. His flow was ok and so wer his punches. Too me it was anoyying that he put those lil stars at the end of his rymes just to explain his lyrics. If we have doubts about Ur verse, we'll usually ask. thats the greatness of metaphores and punchlines. Ur line punchess wer kinda basic, so we dont realy need the explanations but ok.
all in all, I like Ur verse, U stook to the point and aimed at Ur apponent for real. Keep it thug, and practice kid.

V/BigChase

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..