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06-27-04, 01:15 PM
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Drunk Driver
IP:
This was a topical league verse but my opponent didnt show, I didnt think i did a great verse but here it is......critique and teach me
 Drunk Driver Drop the glass & hit another shot, feeling like no one can harm me, Just drunk myself enough courage, to put brave a cowardly army. Leaving the bar with horrid intentions, not to mention draconic, Gun in my pocket, desiring to put bullets in that bitches sockets. No need for logic or wisdom, that bitch broke my heart, Im ending the relationship of my dreams, while she is about to start. She wants to part, she found someone else, ill be left here by myself, A personal trainer called Pablo, set in matrimony for July twelfth. We had a catholic union, and whore adultery is a sin, But you don’t care that im fucking anguished when your fucking him. I met this Pablo, a dirty Spaniard; he is just like me but a rip off, And we will see if his sex is better, when I cut his freakin dick off. Approaching the car, frustrated and raged as I insert in the keyhole, Riddled with the stench of booze, so wasted that my brain feels feeble. 45 Chevy no equal, fast vehicle and any road it can maintain, im going off the point a bit now, and the road, shit I’m in the wrong lane. Back on track, the fact is Lucy I loved you and that’s gospel truth, The kids we raised and home we made surely is enough proof. at least we be…what the fuck, there is a police car in my mirror, Signalling he wants me to pull over as he flicks his lights dimmer. Awaiting for him to approach, but there’s something that is strange, The way he is swerving back and forth between the inner and outer lane. Now hitting about 70, there’s plenty of room for me run, But I froze in the road, my flesh about to meet metal in the form of tun. Fuck, my plans are ruined, this drunkard is gonna take my life, All I wanted was to do is this, but slower to my ex wife. See the embarrassment wasn’t the agony, this was the tip of the iceberg, That I adored the beauty of a woman, but didn’t even like her. What you need to feel, is what its like to have your heart tore, And a punch for every dam time, that you made my eyes pour. |
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