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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
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| View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
| killacamflow |
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5 | 71.43% |
| METAHphysiKz |
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2 | 28.57% |
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Metah: I felt like you had good structure, and the overall flow was great. The punchlines were hitting, however the last 6 lines i didnt like the wordplay. They didnt seem to fit together well, and it made your verse end weak. Also, you didnt need to numbers, I think everyone can count punchlines.
KCF: You also had good structure, I believe you had the better flow. You def hit him hard with the personals. Your punchlines just sounded a lot harder than his, and you had much better word play. I think "Screename" and "be the same" sounds better than "Pheonix" and "Penis". Vote = KCF |
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