Seventhird, I was feelin ya flow all the way thru your verse. You had good structure which made it easier to read as well. The opener I didnt like too well, 5 to zero ive seen peeps say something about KOing people too many times, its just to played out. A couple nice personals though, Young blood, I liked that it was good for a closer. Your punches were here and there, but you didnt have a couple of ones that were hard. Good Verse

Jokah, your flow was pretty nice...it went from one verse to another very well. Towards the end though it seemed like you got off with the flow and structure a lil, but nothing major. You did attempt to use some personals against him, which werent bad. You tried to use young blood after he already used it against you, and I think that back fired. He hit you pretty hard with that one already, and it wasnt workin tryin to turn it around. REally aint see any multis from you, and you seemed to talk about yourself a lot too. If your going to praise yourself, at least use it to put the other person down. Your punches just werent connecting with Seventhird...good flow and shit just come harder next time.

v/seventhird