This was a pretty tight battle, I had to read thru it a couple times to decide who won, ill break it down like this:

Flow: I thought MC AKs flow started off good, but then it was spuratic, it kinda came and went. Miss Lyricist had a good flow the entire verse though, it stayed constant. v/Miss

Structure: Miss lyricist was def on point with her structure, which in turn helped her flow. MC AK you aint really have bad structure, but your 2nd and last lines were streched a lil much, i mean maybe strech em a word or 2 if the syllables match, but it hurts ya flow if its anymore than that.
v/Miss

Personals: MC AK you was all over this one, talkin about the spanish and PMS, and shit...i dont need to say anything more you took this easy.
v/MC AK

Punches: MC AK had some pretty hard hittin punches, but then again so did Miss. Lyricist. I like her punches though because a lot of them are funny, and its fun to read the verse. I think MC AKs hit harder though.
v/ MC AK

Multis: This category also belonged to MC AK he came right out of the hole, throwin punches with multis. Miss Lyricist I wasnt seein any from you, just mainly AB AB rhyming (I do that a lot too though lol).
v/MC AK

Open/Close: Miss Lyricist came hard with her opener, and she exited nicely also. MC AK your opener was aight, but it wasnt as hard as hers, which was a good metaphor. Her closer was also a nice punch, not real hard. MC AK you shoulda threw a punch at the end, you just kinda fizzled out there at the end.
v/Miss on both

Overall Miss wins it just by the skin of her teeth, with the opener and closer.

v/Miss Lyricist