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Banned: Biting
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Sire
look kid, I'ma beat your ugly head open you're better off.... than online, so just log out instead of postin 6/10....wordplay was there but the punch was weak I'm launchin the end.... of you're RB career DeLeon's got the Blueprint .................of my fuckin fist on his ear 7.5/10....i like the concept..good play on his crew name kids got the brains of a chimp, catch my drift? got the jump off poppin... when he landed at the bottom of the cliff 7/10...decent no surprise he comes dope, when it's me he's facin DeLeon's on my dick so when I get hard, he'll rise to the occasion 7/10..liked the punch but the phrase is played call me the laugh doctor, shit almost comical I have no patients.... & I need some, so I'ma put him in the hospital 7/10...it was ight beatin me's impossible... let it go, it's over son like you 68'd me ..................I leave you owe 'n one 8/10...i see where u were goin with this...i like the wordplay...by far ur best bar Overall-42.5/60....good flow and wordplay...punches could of come harder..personals and name plays were ight...pretty good verse Deleon: Mods…U really want me to square wit him…Aight…here I come I’ll feed your tank top w/ pellets like fer fish in an aquarium 8/10...dope punch...good wordplay Call this an obstacle?...please who said this kid's a threat? im sending him back to square one like rookie smokers on their 1st cigarette 8/10...1st line decent..2nd dope (this line aint stretched whoever said that?) This is how a Hard-Wood Class-sick suppose to go your rep is getting torn hes an alias…but your verses need extension cords….. to get restored 7/10...pretty decent Murkin this herb wont land me any kind of respect…. Cuz hes known to talk out his ass like Eddie Murphy in Shrek 8/10...haha funny and creative..solid punch What I write kills….play your role and follow Capitols drills cuz Even If You Put Aleve In A Rope you couldn’t tie-pill (type ill).... 8.5/10...dope ish right there...i used an aleve line kinda similar once haha good shit D So I’m gonna finish this herb and put an end to his text.. History Repeats itself watch another Sire get sentenced to the death.... 7/10...ight...it was good but the punch was lacking for a closer Overall-46.5/60...better then sire's verse...i was feelin ur punches more i liked ur wordplay better..it flowed just fine...dope shit homie Vote-Deleon...he came harder |
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