after i'm done givin a rap lesson to this cat spanky,
him and his whole crew will be da 1st ones to thank me,
/\ Not feelin this no punch

u must be diagnosed wit the weak rapper disease,
i dont even have to cock a glock to get u on ur knees,
/\ Doesnt link up at all again no punch

down deep inside this kid is a big fan of me,
and he hopes and wishes to one day be able 2 handle me,
/\ a lil punch but self gloryfied again not feelin

if u ever had any skillz in ur style then uve lost it,
im bout 2 murder u boy, and add ur soul 2 my deposit,
/\ I liked this 1 nice punch also good wordplay

when im on da mic, my lyrics come at u like 80lbs of steel,
if u were on a label, id kill the owner jus 4 given a bitch like u a deal,
/\ Flow's off a weak punch at best no real wordplay

rappin aint the career for u if u have plans on making some loot,
i dont see why u wont just give it up like a fuckin prostitute,
/\ Not a hot closer but a lil wordplay used

You need to elevate dawg u only had 1 really good bar in that, the rest was lacking strength in punches and wordplay