EyeDentdy
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...thats newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were a lil stretched though...flow fell off a lil cause of the lines that were stretched...u had a few mets...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...decent personal...

Kelo
structure was wack...all of ur lines were fucked up...flow fell off cause of the wackness in ur structure...u had tight metas...wordplay was ok...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Kelo had better metas...both had decent wordplay...EyeDentdy had the slightly better structure...the more stable flow...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...EyeDentdy gets my vote...

VOTE - EYEDENTDY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...