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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
WillNova 5 62.50%
the 8th wonder 3 37.50%
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Old 07-13-04, 08:34 PM   #31
SparSin
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let me break it down

IP:

Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
7/10 didnt just give ya that cuz my name up in it... but good openin, and creativity
It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//
6/10 creative, my opion kinda a weak punch tho
Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//
4/10 alright punch... shoulda said j-low instead of brit...*SLAnTED
Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle//
Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled//
5/10 nother alright punch, didnt surprise me much to be honest...
Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already//
You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony//
7/10 better punch
Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//
8/10 good endin, way to flip his garbage shit, but still could of been better...
*minus 3 points for slanted extended bars... sorry homz how i do it...

I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins//
8/10 good openin, and good checkin... just get to the point lol
reach within, and give it ya heart and soul//
worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls//
7/10 nice punch feelin that shit.. way to extend from the last bars...(WITHIN)
stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs//
ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs//
5/10 might be tru, kinda weak tho
u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//
6/10 alight
its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble//
predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals//
7/10 gettin alittle better, im feelin that all 8th did was reverse alot of ya shit... now im just feelin like im readin the same shit twice....
with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled//
knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double//
7/10 alright ending...

33/60-8th

40/60-will nove

more breakin down...check it 8th, thought ya flow was sick when i first read it cause i read ya's first....then after i read will's i noticed all ya did was try to reverse his shit... not to hate or nothin... be more creative next time.... thats why im given this one to will... i would have given ya a shit more points if i didnt feel like you just tryin to reverse everything.. but other then that alright battle for ya 2, return the fav up on my audio....up in my sig under calamity...
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