lets see, Gods sons verse got so stretched at times that some of it didn't make sence. I shouldnt have to spend 5 min. on each line rearanging were everything should go just to make it sound decent. Ur punches were kinda played out and not too good. U lack mostly in punches and structure. this cauzed Ur flow to suffer as well. U should work on that. making a complicated verse dont mean U'll get the win. if no one understands wat Ur trying to say cuz u put all these symbols, and hyphens and shit, then U most likely wont get voted for. Ur verse gets a 5 out of 10.

Durmil,
Ur verse was a lot easier to read. U word play was decenct and punchlines were also a bit played but more decent then Ur opponents. Ur flow was a lot easier to understand as well. U took some ok personals and it helped a lot that u explained em after the verse rather then during it. thats good for ur structure. I also liked the last lines to ur verse. that was nice. Over all, Ur verse gets a 8 out of 10.

No beef, just elivate more.
V/ Durmil

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..