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yea the title got u here but the rhymes'll keep yu
i wrote this last week at home caz dat kiss was in my head i was creative but i stayed on topic so i hopr yall like it is three verses doe so where my faithfull readers at???? feedback is a must!!!!!! why is there 2 voices in my head that constantly fight// when if it was jus one speakin i'd do that much more right// why i gotta struggle when everybody else jus look so smooth// an they can chill but if i do i got that much more to lose// why's the only peace i can find under my roof// an wen im out why am i precieved as an an-i-mal on the loose// if god's the only one can save me why dont he hear my SOS// and why the hell did i fail trig (trigonometry) if i no i did my best// why life gotta throw me a curve// when they no that im at the plate swingin away like a nigga just learned// its been said that life is a bowl of lemons tossin sour shit at chu// so i jus make lemonade instead of puckerin up like a fool// why is the best pussy burinin or riddled wit aids an clap// why you gotta hate that im gonna put the nati(cincinnati) on the map// why i gotta sprint in this rap game to put niggaz in the rear// why jadakiss gotta be the first to coin this idea WHY??? anthony hamilton chorous i asked why them voices in my head had to constantly fight// caz one voice is enough an it'd b easier doin rite// well that's caz every man's gotta struggle with that one// kinda like sidney poiter in rasin in the sun// i also asked why i had to struggle why everybody chilled// caz god suited me for bigger thangs if u cant feel that u aint real// 7874 is my residence the only place i find peace of mind// but the second im out that door im a thorn in society's side// caz im AMERIKAZ nightmare like larenz tate at young age// but instead of murkin meltheads i throw rhymes on the page// plus im wholsommly ghetto an hoodly handsome// wit enuff rhymes to spit bars around you him her an THAN some// the bible says god turns ya mind weak after you sin for so long// tha's prolly why when i ask for help he jus want me to leave him alone// plus the devil keeps enticin me with his treasures of the material world// but they booby trapps like burnin pussy and gold diggin gurls WHY?? anthony hamilton chorous this little lyrical excersise of mine// is a way to help me grow as a person an a rapper over time// so when u turn me louder dont hate on what i said// jus listen to what i preech an let my lyrics marinate in ya head// caz cant nobudy get with me when im on this lyrical tip// u culd squint to c the flow but still end up b'm a 4 eyed prick// burned out, irritable, an jus flat out stressed// that u cant keep up with this nigha tha's lyriclly blessed// my flow shined like untarnished gold straight outta treasure chest// in laymens terms i manifest midwest hip hop at its best// so gimme the respect a blue collar MC like me is due// before u try to spit aginst me an look like a fool// these rap niggaz claim that they've forseen the vision// thinkin they creative but they hear my rhymes an begin to spit they renditions//i ask questions caz i refuse to b ignorant rhymin glued together letters//so i'll just spit what im capable to show the public who's better// da's WHY!!! feed back is a must!!!! yea this is the first flow of my open mic mixtape text collection called makin a buzz 101, where i listen to songs an re-make them to my liking so jus hit me back critiquin' this one get it on open mic awards an even hit me up with a request for the next song the next 2 imma re-do are locked up hood hop so b on the look out |
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