Fluidmoon

Ya must be Mentally Deranged for tryin to battle me,
With a name like that,I "Dare ya to Turn" back, its too easy,
->>second line fell off in a major way but it was decent

I need a magnifying glass cuz ya punches aren't detectable,
Ya got no flow bro just quit cuz ya shit aint intellectual,
->>i was kinda feelin it

Rhymes is lacking punches,so take my advice, brush up on skill,
Cuz i bring sick fluidity with words, damn, mami's too illl,
->>second line was fillerish but ok

Too young, only 16, ya have no real rappin experience,
So I'll have to merk ya, just so u ya able to handle more of this,
->>doesnt rhyme at all

DaReturn

Fluidmoon is bout to look like micheal jackson in thriller
cus i say fuck New york, its da return of the cerial killer
->>what?

this pedaphile still fucking kids, ill make him leave earth
you prefer dicks since you aint never had pussy since birth
->>probably so if its a girl do your homework dude

the more you act poetic the more pathetic your fuckin shit gets
yo im homophobic, so you dont get credit,i hate battlin faggets
->>choppy flow and doesnt rhyme

your existness in life doest matter nemore since no cares
im relentless to stab this bitch till red covers his hairs
->>first line doesnt make sense but its ok

this niggas battling out of his league and i didnt show no pity
im done fucking with this fake ass easy e, go back to the city
->>this was my favorite part of it

Im gonna go with fluidmoon here...verses were about the same but some of DaReturn's shit didnt make any sense. Keep elevating.

v/fluidmoon

\/I didnt sleep on your battle dont sleep on mine\/

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