if it was confusing thats cause i had too much to say in 10 lines, so my fault
i had started typing and ended up with like 45 lines so i had to cut back
i dont expect to win, thats not the point, cause i woulda never battled
i just want to open some people's eyes to people like him whose records indicate lyrical dominance but verses dont be too great. dont get me wrong mim, you good all hate aside, you good, but i just wish you had a more original style instead of following the same formula every battle, you win with it but u need to be true to your own style
ya lyrics still scream"I've Watched 8 Mile 45 Times". Me? Im still trying to get the hang of this but each verse i try you bring you something different. im trying 2 improve just like all of you on this site

Drop ya honest opinions is all i ask. No hate. this is hip hop