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Old 08-01-04, 01:40 PM   #26
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From: From the depths of darkness...........no solicitors
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spul....
your verse was good. the polifick verse had the hardest hitting lines in your verse.

"I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could"

But there were some other good lines in the apo verse.

"You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated"

i give him an over all 7/10

Apo..........
your verse was all about dissing there pictures, witch was funny but it got old....
best lin aganst polifick

"Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline."

after that i lost intrest in the poli verse

best lines agast spul

"Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging."

these were the more hard hitting punches but you still was dissing on his pic most of the time.
overall 6/10

polifick..............
i wasnt feeling any of your verse, it was like you put it together so you didn't no show. it was horeable.

Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...

these were the only lines that i liked....
over all 4/10

vote spul

we have a winner
 
 


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