did everybody see my verse? here i'll post it again, its my entry verse

hahaha first he tries out for L.I. but couldn't make the cut
so he starts his own shit, what a stupid cunt
thug life??? pff you fuckin pac wanna be
nobody gonna wanna join a crew lead by Andy
whats the deal, do you just wanna be me?
stars a crew, copys my sig steeze, what the fucks up b
grow some fuckin balls, and close this thread, stop wishin
you'll be lucky if any fuckin newbs audition