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Old 08-07-04, 12:44 PM   #7
Vango
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
 
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She's the biggest in this battle by far....I'll knock her down to size
I mean shit, I'd give you a chin check....but I can't count that high
good opener4
Fat ass bitch needs a diet.....Atkins ain't new to your health
How you plan to move us....when you ain't even moving yourself
not bad
Immigration isn't perfect....leaving this Latin bitches knees scarred
Time to pay up, got her looking for that green....................card
not great
Probably wants to eat me for breakfast....said it with certainty
Belly looking like a spare tire.....her user title fits her perfectly
decent
She has yet to take a licking.....not talking about lack of slaughter
Named herself Latinkitten....but no one's going south of the border
not good
Try using some summer's eve....and tell your girls, no doubt
Cause all I smell is pussy....right after Latin opened her mouth
not good
I hate to end it here.....gotta abstain from the boast
Cause the best part of my verse...will be contained in your post
decent closer






SOME EXPLANATIONS:

RV=RECREATIONAL VEHICLE AND/OR RAP VERSE

THE REST OF IT SPEAKS FOR ITSELF...

HERE WE GO

seen his fam..his wife's a man..showin up wasn't smart/
cuz his entire FAMILY TREE..resides in a TRAILOR PARK//
good opener
this hillbilly isnt really from philly...do us a favour/
don't be postin on RV..jus cuz it reminds u of ur TRAILOR//
nice punch
horrible audio..is ur wife ur bro??..its a simple probe/
not cuz he's MARRIED..but he aint gettin a SINGLE vote//
not good
married a short haired boy..well,i dont really care much/
yea he found his MATCH..cuz they both got the SAME HAIRCUT//
nice punch
n we BOTH MARRIED MEN..think that makes us EQUAL?/
face it..u're in CRYME sindicate..cuz incest is ILLEGAL//
ummmmmmmmmmmmmm........dont think so
ur punches aren't hittin...both u n ur twin look timid/
doesnt mean u SPITTIN..cuz ur wife's ur SPITTIN IMAGE//
nice punch
why u think he married a guy...n lives in mobile homes/
cuz they got CHEMISTRY...meanin the SAME CHROMOZONES//
__________________good closer


tight battle from both, i had to re-read bothe verses again. i gotta give this one to lk, she had just one or two harder hitting punches. Enygma came pretty decent but a few of your personals were kind of generic, not personal. good battle.

vote-Lk
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