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Old 08-07-04, 12:55 PM   #7
Vango
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
 
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From: NAPTOWN
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Check our rankings..its clear who is better..
..coz P.S. comes last..like extra info in a letter.
okay opener, nothing great
Sick of ya dumb shit..so bitch ima knock u out..
..coz ur teachers dick..is the smartest thing from ur mouth.
nice punch
You write like Mike Tyson..dogg it’s official,
..Coz ur skill is empty..like his initials.
not a great attempt at wordplay
Ur a geeky white kid..& ur writtens are crap..
..& ur so fuckin preppy..even ur name rocks Gap.
not good
Used ur punches before..there so dam old..
..ill write em on u nose..then begin 2 break the mould.
not good
If ur moms the word..I kno ur no religious believer..
..but by the way u spread it..I shud call u a preacher.
decent punch
Ur an ugly fuckka..& no chick wuda wanna romance you..
..& basically ur not wack………………………………………⠀¦â€¦â€¦
…………………………………………†¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦â€¦.
………………………………...its actually what u’ve advanced to.
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Its simple as that, you suck at it so you better quit rap.
Been ghosting for peeps? Guess thats why most of RV is wack.

good opener
your bars are old as hell, thought they were coming from ancient times.
Dug a few of your lines....... and reported an archeological find.
nice punch
This kid is wack as hell, no lie just writing a description.
.....cause Apo's day will never come like atheist predictions.
not great
& dont worry, when kid's bite your rhymes, don't take it as a surprise.
....Its not that your dope, its cause your skill's just that size.
um noooo.
He's not smart. Posting his verse is like asking tourists for directions.
and in this battle his life's on the line like dial-up internet connections.
nice punch
after dropping he'll be on the ground, kind of like the pic in his AV.
cause I'll be busting holes in Apo like having sex with newborn babies.
sick and not good
I'll rape P, this battle's like one of Apo's family parties.
Because after this verse, eosis will end up getting fucked over at RV.
not a good closer

this was close, Apo definitely not up to the level i've seen you spittin at lately. PS, you surprisingly came with some decent punches, kind of faded at the end. But enough to take this battle.

v- PS
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