willa...i was really feeling the peom, but for the peotry league....it didnt really fit........now i can undertand u writing a poem story and then bringin in the "write about the picture" part....but i think u could have went about it in adiffrent way, so there for it wouldnt seem as if u went off topic. Becus when u first read your poem it has nothing to do with the picture...untill the very end.....and truthfully i didnt really want to read all that, it was a waste becuz it didnt have much to do with the picture. What i think u should have did was write a poem story and the scene of the story could have been where that picture was.....that would have stayed on topic much better.

Now as far as prodigy.....you stayed on topic.....ya poem went well with the picture and i was feeling it for the most part

both poems was really hot, but becuz prodigy went str8 to the point...talked bout the picture....my vote has to go to him

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