I'm new here (obviously.. look at the post count), so I'm just going to drop something that I wrote a week ago for this topical tournament I was in (at the kanye west battle boards). Lemme know what you guys think.. it's not the best (especially the intro) but hopefully you'll agree with some of my ideas/critiques.. anyways, leave as much feedback as possible. THANKS. and if you don't understand any of it (esp the whole gay marraige thing) then ask.. and i'll elaborate. ~Osk

oh yah, and just so I won't get in trouble.. i left feedback here

(hope it works)

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