Voted For: String9487

Wordplay - Drastic: he had more multies that helped..
Structure - String had way more straight lines that looked coo
Punches - Strings I think had more, some weren't punchlines, but clever disses and were in threw his whole verse..
Flow - Tie, couldn't see nothig wrong with either flow, was smooth..
Personals - none really, none stuck out so both don't get scored on it..
Vocab - drastic mayber, he had more wordy phrases and more verbiage in the least ammount of space..


Overall - String, you had better punches and structure which outwieghs the other stuff, you had a more entertaining verse this time, so you get the vote..

PLZ return the favor right here, thnz, i appreciate it..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144411

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