Sup, this is my first drop on RB and something out of the norm, this particular piece is for a hype tracc, which is hopefully gonna be dropped in audio, its written to a beat... Jus think theres something missing... Drop some comments and critique...

Are ya retinas down or ya Knuckles Up?
Look whos dividing the musk from tales of Dawn til Dusk,
Pure innocence, not guilty to trust, simply born from the just,
Rolled a pair of dices for luck, praying earth aint a fuss,
Collect and such, pass GO! show Whitechapel aint stuck,
No sixes and sevens to heavens and got my right to plush,
See my lifes been touched with a mind opened wide,
Peachy seeming to blush, are you a closed book type?
Winded with a gust, theres nothing to rush, Always something to hide,
They say pride is the only mis judgement of my sight,
Deliver light that the greatest souls fail to ignite...
Snakes, Ladders and heights climbed with my eyes,
Now forget being polite,
This train of thought will terminate after your nine lives,
Swing the sword with might in the proxim's of Nova's light,
Faster then mastering the flute of Goa's night...
Dear stoner, twice in ya open dosage, suprise the poison of Cobras,
DAMN! your still sober, twisted in ToriX, look closer,
This is Classical but I aint Mozart,
And I aint gonna mack this solid, move them toes, wha!,
Recited in the finest knowledge, aint it suppose ta,
Philosophy, life is a logic from the beginning, its over,
Produced without the Smooth, all is hope star,
Open ya ventricles with the vibes of a crow bar..
So wait! what we achieved so far, Knuckles Up,
Victims of no holds barred, giving heart and ettiquette to ya systems,
Listen, seek control before all the hitting start, skip in the dark,
Shadow box with spas against the art, Have I stopped, ended?
Mastered the perspective without releasing no message,
Suspected, I didnt stress it, rewind again, I stand corrected...

Thanks for reading, now drop something... MODS, I replied to about 8/9 posts, so dont close this...

Peez...