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Old 07-05-02, 02:30 AM   #1
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Poetic Sinna ( My BEST Poetry EVER!!)

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Okay I've done alot of work in here before.....
Now It Has Been Accepted as poetry....but really as never been too poetic....Deep nontheless but not poetic.......
This Right here in my opinion is my BEST POETRY here to date...da message i'm tryna send is much deeper than words...it's da thought i'm tryna get inside your mind......
And I jus hope...that when your done...you've takin a message from it....It's not one side to it......
As long as you get some sorta message from it....then that's all dat matter's...........

So here it is.......
My best Poetry Ever
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Why is da worst perception of life seen thru windows..??
why is that...i dream nightmares..and never wake up on a pillow..??
Still tho....I'm like a flower wit it's petal's fallin down.....
once at top of it's game....it's overweighed by it's crown..//
why is da best felt emotion felt thru a frown..??
and yet silence still as it's own sound...//
We fight for good...but bad wayz we go about it....
Conflicts disease...our self esteem...and stuck here shoutin...//
it's like for da first time standin at da bottom lookin up at da mountain..//
lookin in da stars..and wishin you could count them..
without em...we prolly be confused...walk da wrong direction...which path to choose..??//
we lose time to heaven in it's prime....
meanin to dis is..life's takin once it reach it's shine..//
kinda like mine...but i live to tell...
so i wonder am i da man we know in hell...//
caused bright stars to rise and then fell..
and it don't sit well...now tears turn farther...
drop to da floor..another drop,,,it just makes thingz harder..//
Kinda Like "Our Father" Who's Art is In heaven....
little love here...pain over here...and that's wut i'm gettin...//
my final question...is can we forget a killer..??
i preach da truth of life, death, I am Da Poetic Sinna......//

I Hope You Have Enjoyed..........
If You Read Then I'd Greatly Appreciate Your Thought's,Belief's,And Opinions On this........
Thank You.....

Peace
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