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View Poll Results: turban vs big gz
big gz 1 16.67%
TURBAN 5 83.33%
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Old 09-11-04, 01:21 PM   #16
mistah_tate
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Voted For: TURBAN

well, i think Turban took this one, you elevated alot since the last battle, i liked the punchlines and the closer was pretty good. the only line that was questionable was the one about the gay rapper, that was a little wierd, but the rest was aight. decent vocab and good punchlines

big GZ, your aight but your style is too generic, it reminded me of somethin 50 cent would say, which isnt a good thing. work on the vocab, structure was good, had a few good lines but not enough to take the W, the strawberries line was wack and didnt fit, just keep 'elevatin'

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