Voted For: Ice Pick

Does anybody believe in structure and flow anymore?
Guess Not.

Any how.
Eka
Your lines were too short. Not to the point. and farfethed.
Your metiphores an wordplay was rather dumb.
for example.
beef like where the lasso
Not liking your verse at all.
Ice Pick
Way to stretch a bar into a line.
Other than your structure the quality was fairly good.
I liked your closer.
EK be my guest & get HYPED cause I'm like rit-A-lin
U couldn't FREAK it if U battled in the MISSIONARY position'
Only thing is. stop bre-a-kin things up an CAP'in like that.
Believe me. We can see punches. Don't need Help.

Pretty easy take for Ice I think anyways

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