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AutoMATIK™ 5 83.33%
System Crasher 1 16.67%
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Old 10-02-04, 11:55 AM   #15
Abraxas
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

both of you did noty a good job and didnt try ya best ummmmmm

Auto: ya verse was iight good siht,,,, nice verse overall.... ya li\nes were fucking strecthed up like a mo fucka and that was not good.... you need to improve on that ya structre was not good though it flowed iight ... ya punches were iigh and it was good though ya personalls were weak.. nice vokab though it dont do shit in a verse.......

System: i though you were better you had a not very good verse ya structre was ways messed up and it wasnt that good ya flow was horrible and messed ya punchjes were kinda weak and same to ya personals..... try harder nexty time

VOte Auto for a better verse
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