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openers and closures do it for me:
auto: ya had good punches, nice punches. but the thing is they werent perosnals for the most part, ya blind spittin...literally. nice wrodplay and vocab, but ya closure was either too complex for me or just didnt have any sort of rhyme scheme. good luck next time.
lyric: ya had decent punches, not as good as auto's but your punches turned out to be perosonals as well, ya have nice flow, ya rhymes seem to be perfect length, but ya need some mulits, vocab, or wordplay to add some flavor to ya self. congrats with this one, ya verse was decently good, but ya closure was fire, thats why ya gettin the vote..
please hit up a vote in the link, an honest vote will be appreciated.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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10-06-04, 08:10 PM
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