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Old 10-07-04, 10:26 PM   #9
SubtleTee
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This was a pretty nice battle ya 'know

Yvonne: This was an aight verse from you, you're flow was a little sketchy though and your vocab was really elementry. I just didn't really see any punches that took him out, it was kinda mediocre. I know you can do better, so just apply yourself to your verses. You could have won.

Pluto: The flow was nice and I really enjoyed your metaphores. Again taking advantage of her sex with the femcee punches. This happens a lot. Some of your punches really made me think "ohhhhhhhhhh" Nice verse.


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