Like deflated parachutes leavin' ya on "ground"
Imitatin' "russian rulet losers," only good for 1 round
^ Russian Roulet line a little played, weak meta

Like "white bigots" on da police force I "shot-a-boy"
If ya vying for victory why can't I spot-a-ploy
^ Haha, nice name play here

U lose more then "lifers" do of there lifetime
U couldn't spue hot shit if ya deficated on a mine
^ Kinda weak nice vocab though

You must crossbreed ya verses, dogyear rhymes
7 to 1 winnin' ratio, only infants been "KOed" more times
^ Dog years thing is nice, I liked this bar

All ya dope is sticks an stems, drop dimebags of self lies
U could put "mike hawk" on stilts an not "rank" high
^ Nice closer, good personal.


Overall 7/10


Dogg I'm So Complex When I Step In The Ring They Renamed Me ''Mr.PERPLEX''...
Nobody Would Feel Your ''Scriptures'' Even If U Posted Them In ''Codex''..
^ Pretty good opener, nothing special

U Wouldnt Even ''Cum'' With A ''Hot Spit'' If U Performed ''Oral Sex''..
You So Dumb You'd Miss The ''Point'' Of My Disses Even If They Were Marked With A 50 Foot ''X''...
^ Terribly streched, bad flow, no good punch

Your Records Got U In ''Dreamland'' Like Your Part Of The MATRIX..
This Kids Steppin To ''Sick'' Rhymes That'll Leave U Needin ''Pediatrics''...
^ Rhymes badly, aight concept though

If My Verse Is ''Tighter'' Then I Hope Like Some U Dont Resort To ''Dick Ridin'' As Your TACTICS..
I'ma ''Disable'' Ya Flow n Have U Postin In The Thread Thats Strictly For ''Spastics''
^ Didn't make much sence

This The ''Writers Block'' An Your Sentenced To ''Life With A Pen''..
After This Verse 'NOW NIGGUHS NOTHIN' Is Why They Call You 'Triple N!!'
^ Nice closer

Overall 6.5/7










This was a close battle.

Vote- Triple N

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