this is just part of the 1st verse of this song....its about a soldier in iraq...just something i am feeling right now....its to the hate me now instrumental.....please give me some feedback on this.....if u think its wack...tell me.....if u think its hot...tell me....thanks

TRUE LIFE HERO

Hault regular lives, steps aside for the lessened hype/
as he accepts the pride to provide and its somewhat unrecognized//
but lets it slide cuz he catches vibes/
from the techs and nines//
each moment less deprived of outlooks on aspects of life/
the test is right here to make it out iraq alive//
writes his family letters just so he can pass the time/
half the time you wonder what goes through his criminal mastermind//
the truth is he wants to get back to what he calls disaster;life/............................................


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