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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-22-04, 03:31 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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read and critique it.............
IP:
it seems like
to sleep right we must stay tight cause if not i'm like dat cable channel up all night bothered by street lights, feelin' dat this life bites earnin' my stripes in dis hell they call paradise while dese average guys take to lies the world advertise they neeta read b'tween da lines to get wats mis'd byda average eye an' understand dat this golden format of daily combat contain niccas with fairly strong backs thorough cats and when da trials attack we stay calm and relaxed first we analyze then stragetize leavin grow men battered guys when da smoke clears we be da team dats standin' wise why?cause we abandon'd pride left all our feelin's b'hin' perfected the art of war,in a criminals mind so to all who even think about crossin' dat line let it be known ur only lookin' forwards to pine. 
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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