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Old 10-22-04, 04:09 PM   #16
frein-ma$ter
Banned: Biting
 
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stephen-

I dont know who you are, Your fuckups? I could write pages you know
And id take you back to school.. But i finished Grade 7 ages ago,
filler^^

Smoka knows, Im twistin this nut like i resemble some spanners
The type of guy to say nigga please!!, cause his mom taught him manners,
average ^

Your heads gettin bigger man, so this loss is affecting your crew,
Funny..
.. This is my 30th post, and im still more respected than you,
alright

You were gone? News to me but you better start listenin' bitch,
Fact is we knew you was gone.... we just didnt give a shit.
too basic

Your just whack, so i dont know why you choose to lie,Said face the facts.. so now hes staring whack eye 2 eye,
mmmn

Dont respect you, cause man you never come hard,
Youd live of reputation, but its not gettin' you far.
alright

socrates-

This battle is useless as fuck kid I ALREADY BEAT YOU
So now ill just decide whats more of a joke, you or your crew
decent

iight well im typing with my right, ill slap you with the other hand
Cuz you gunna need enough Dr.'s to cure aids in my motherland
good

multis is nothing, so my verse and you have something in common
This fag went Lloyd Banks style on me, and started eating raw-men
alright

They say you're stiff competition, i dont believe it dumbass
Stephen Elwood?^^^ More like an ignorant kid in spanish class
nice

Youre just right above me man, ill knock you to a lower place
Confidence in your crew is dwindling WHOA spelled in lower-case
nice[b]

Go ahead drop your hardest, i wanna see what youre about
Cuz if we goin for match of the weak
........your verse will DEFINATLY help out
[b]mmmnnn?? is this a compliment LOL?


[b]kats-

punches-socrates(came a lil harder)
multies-none
wordplay-socrates(had like 1 or 2 lines alright wordplay)
personals-socrates(they were forced though)
creativity-rarely any...too simple verses
metaz-none
flow-tie

well both mc's came with a simple verse...i gave this to socrates because his punches were more consistent and he came harder......u both need to put some multies in there and some creative wordplay to elevate ya verses....anyway this was a weak battle...

vote- socrates
 
 


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