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Old 11-12-04, 07:27 AM   #16
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man... i figured this would at least be close.... shi beat this dude by a mile... his verse was just way too simple... shi pretty much ripped on his name everyway possible, had a better vocab and flow... i've seen her drop way harder against better opponents but it really wasn't necessary here... definiytely the weakest verse i seen her drop thus far but she still edged him out pretty easily...

dude you had some pretty soft punches man... ya best personal was about the way her eyebrow looked in her pic?...baaahhhhhhhh... build ya vocab some more and fix ya flow... it was off in places... damn a structure ... i know it's text but I don't think kats should get judged on that... ain't no english professors in here.... werd!
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