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..Kontroverzey.. 1 16.67%
Verbal Phenom 5 83.33%
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Old 11-27-04, 12:04 PM   #16
Mark Greyson
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LMAO oh my god those verses sucked, however:


Kon:

And Dawg, I dont even care How Many Bars You spit....
'Cause One of mine equal up to 1000 of that bullshit.....

DUde set this battle up without my Concent..Now im merkin any prospect...
Im handin It to you, Like Grade A Science projects...

the only two things that sucked but weren't horrible
you need to work on: punches, flow, metaphors, personals and most of all punches. Yes I said punches twice you basically had none.
2/10


Verb:

u smart? nah mines a superior mind,spittin straight line like a parallelogram
S.uperior M.ethods are often known to s.uck m.eat, so i'll buy u a leg of lamb

actually that was a punchline so it really beat his ENTIRE verse even though it sucked.
you need to work on: punches & flow, the rest will be there you have a grasp on the battling idea. Stop talking about yourself
3/10


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