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Old 12-01-04, 04:11 PM   #1
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Here's a prime fuckin' example of why feedback on RV can piss somebody off

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#1...Phoenix claims my "flow" is boring because I have a basic rhyme scheme...

hmm...He just put his foot in his mouth because it's obvious he doesn't listen to my shit before he critiques it...or he's jus plain stupid...

Let's examine my "basic" xxxxxxxa/xxxxxxxa rhyme scheme as he put it.


Here's an excerpt of the lyrics from one of my recent tracks:


"And I ain't talkin 7/3, he's never heard/the herb who neva learns eva disturb Q on planet earth, u stay in a skirt/the stains in my shirt remain from my disdain for your worth/ so what I'm sayin is your worth ain't worth more than ur brains in the dirt/it's plain I been irked since the day u claimed u was first/In this food chain, it remains to be heard so what u sayin is absurb/









U ain't got to like what I said...or even HOW I flowed it...but how the FUCK is that a xxxxxa/xxxxxa basic rhyme scheme


get da fuck outta here...
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