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Old 12-01-04, 06:16 PM   #16
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Mmmm, Lemmy See...
By Reading Those Lines I Can Understand Why Someone MAY Say You're Basic...
While You Do Have Alot Of Internals And Shit...
You Dont Really Have ACTUAL Multies...
You Have One Sylable Rhyms That Pop Up Threwout A Bar...
Try Have Actual Multies, Like Have A Two Sylable Pattern...
Have It Apear In The Begining Of A Line And At The End...
And Then Drop Your Internals Threwout Like You Already Do...
I Dunno, I Never Even HEARD Your Shit...
But Im Just Giving Blind Suggestions From What I See In Front Of Me...
Try It Out...
And Seriously, You Need To Stop Complaining All The Time...
Thats All I See Is Threads From You About Other People...
If You Dont Like Something All Of Rv Doesnt Need To Hear About It...
Keep It To Your Self...
Or Use It Tward Your Emotion On A Track And Diss That Person...
But The Whole "Piss n Moan" Thread Is Bullshit...
And Thats Whats Up...
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