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..Exponent.. 5 100.00%
3x 0 0%
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Old 12-15-04, 09:55 PM   #16
Wickedclown
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Voted For: ..Exponent..

aight this was one sided like fuck altho both verses lack.... here is the break dizown:

3X- ya shit needs work dawg, no hate but structure is wack... flow is awfull partly because of the structure... punches and personals were.... aight but need improvement... ya need better rhyme scheme and creativity... overall elevate dawg... 2/10

Exponent- ya shit was aight.. structure was ok but lose the ... after every line, and even out the lines.... flow was good and so were punches and personals... elevate on vocab and creativity and you will be pretty good... you did aight on this one yo...overall 5/10

no hate to either of yall but elevate... EX takes this with an all around better verse......................

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