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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio   | 
|  01-08-05, 03:58 PM |  #16 | ||
| I just don't give a fuck! 
 
 | IP:  no break down needed Ill, your structure was fucked to shit. really no need for the highlight either. explanations are wack. punches were really weak. u need to try and be more creative most of ya verse was stretched. Nice verse prem. not great but decent punches, nice structure. basically, u took this. v/ Prem | ||
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