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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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First open mic from the dex
IP:
I only did this as a tryout and was given the topic but i want to see wat people think of it.
Lifes tribulations
A quick short verse of the tribulations of life If you really want to know ask Brad Pitt’s wife Usually refer to you wife as trouble and strife But shes split now, and shes fit with a hype, watch all the famous guys going in for the swipe Quicker than Twister spitting a well written rhyme. I cant see how he could drive Jen round the bend But She will survive cos shes still got her “friends” Relationships break up, your left to get on the mend The end is always around the corner, Lets not pretend But the tribulation that’s on most of the worlds mind Think of the worst natural shit today to happen to mankind Unlucky people in Asia hit by the Tsunami big wave By wave I dont mean the one you see at a football game I mean the natural disaster where theres no one to blame A damn shame, people left with nothing to claim Who will Bush hold responsible and take aim? Lets all be sensible, donate money for relief aid. Personal tribulation, shit that happens fucking daily spend 20mins at the bus stop waiting, aggrevated. Bus finally comes get moving, arrive at the train station Only to see the driver aint patient, Hes fucked off and you weren’t even late! Give some feedback and i'll return the favour u must drop a link with PROPER FEED-BACK with-in 24 hours or this will be closed.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 links to my feedback: [[[[1]]]]] [[[[2]]]]]
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