FINAL gets my vote his flow was good and he made it easier for me to understand you did not do bad also but keep elevating on it and you will be ok. And most of all Final gets this in every catigory.



it was a clouded horizon and yet the sunshine was showing
fire hydrant open, kids playing with cold water flowing
me and hector in front of the building, observing all else
dealers and gangs not far, but fog hid them from ourselves
all eyes were on the children, theyre so free and non aware
water balloons,blastin music...nowhere near their own despair
theyre sparked with youth they dont know the truth like it or not
then that train of thought empties when i see a car down the block
black all around,tinted windows,broken down rims it was shitty
able to scare off others when it rode slowly through the city
it began slowly making way we stood up we were intimidated
it sped up all screams and running as if we were being raided
we tried to run, we hit the deck and hid behind the other cars
when it was all clear of fear i saw my friend lying on the tar
i found out hes been hit oh shit call the paramedics quick
nah they'll take too long ill drive him now before i regret it
tossed him in the seat ran through red lights at full speed
vision turned blurry and my mind was only swept with memories
hector was my homie for life id die for this kid in an instant
we picked each other up after we've fallen or slipped
its a gift to have him here beside me in my presence
hes not about to leave before we even set precedents
88.9/100

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