Voted For: .MictoriouS.

its mier, and i dont wanna hurt the broke queer
but the last time you gotta check was right here
nope........
you banned d/r cuz nobody likes you at all? well
that wont be a problem for you, cuz your ugly as hell
i cant even think of a word to describe that
you wanna be good, but your wack as shit
who can succeed ''with l punches l like l this l''
i sure as hell can succeed
we talk about the best, but your wack is what be tell em
he puts a 'l' after every punch, cuz thats what he's gettin
wow...that made sense..still sucked...culdve been written better...
so in conclusion ur gay, and showed me what wack is like
so it wont be retirin, when i put down this mic
hah.................no

1/10

mictorious

IP:


..Man your style is just a question of writing u'll get disrespected- for-rhyming...
Cuz u and 'illness' don't go together like dyslexics- and-writing !!
blah...that was decent
See...My Spits 'Rock', So Don't Be surprised if ya get Hit witta Boulder...
Game Over, Cuz Like R-Kelly n' Hova, I'll leave a Big Chip on ya Shoulder..
nah...that was played
Mic’s words get |under ya skin, inta ya veins| n Go [Straight-to-his-Heart],
Its like| Im owning bars in prison yards| the way this Pussy’s [raped-in-my-bars],
repitition aint good...dunt use the same word in the same line..structure aint good
He cant wait to be ripped whne he’s [missin-his-patience]
As Im spittin bars that |Diss-Orient| like Im [rippin-an-Asian],
couldve been written better
This bitch got straight fooled like this Bitch is a villain//
Cut accross your body to leave you more scarred than a ritual killing//
aint feelin it

5/10

mictorious gets this fo betta punches

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