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01-17-05, 03:49 PM | #1 | ||
unknown legend...
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MY FIRST OM...chek the mad skillz!!
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ayo wat's really good in here...this is my first thread in this section...it's all about multi's baby!! hope u like...give me feed thanx!!
im lyrically ruinin ur artistic instruments inevitably telekinetically so hectically u fear my wrath and destructive felony respectively// I'll unravel twisted rhymes to severe ur outer membrane's felt pain and then slice each cell,so u never think of doing that again// im a viscious MC without any moral value,I have a heinous hue I eat words for breakfast and psychically distort their rightful view// Im givin ur dreary evanescence a whole new forbidden perspective That's why I spiritually delete any know members of ur mind's hidden detectives// every smitten verse is a life-eating,tongue-targeted missile with words that kill on sight,like giant unstoppable revolving pistols// the scolded words "ill" and "sick" cant righteously define me rightfully my tyranny's infamy strictly amounts to too much notoriety// I purge any issue that's regarding ur surviving tissues then I hunt all remains, and bury the debris with wrongful tribute// am like a "penta-hexagon",u gotta combine words just to name me im more ruthless than wild animals killin their own babies// i spit "freezing-acid" hotter than the old earth's cold's hurt that spontaneously combusts ur heart so u can have a "soul search"// I'll destroy ur role models and soul mates just to console hate,ur old bait,ur flow's old of date u a slate, ur rhymes are fake, and I lyrically wrecked ur physical state// u a slave to a page in my rhymebook in a gold cage am a young sage ripping u apart at a young age,and leaving u on a bloody stage// I'll shatter ur ribs and splatter ur kids and damage ur crib so u can fathom ur fibs this free's an ad-lib which means am mad kid,that's an adjective,im spillin my flow hand me a bib// I got an after-glow that after-shows from burn-out flowz now u know I dont even show my nose to any foes who flow like corny toes// The event of my eminence brings back remembrance now ur irrelevant like unelegant elephants wit elevenses// Ur presence's essence resents the evidence of my indelible residence cuz my eloquence is cement like increments for incredible instruments// Ur rhymes spark unintelligence existence wit "ill" diligence even my dense fingerprints have more minimum sense// I left u tense, now ur freestyle's irreverent elements are badly bent// I left u with a minor dent like I did ur friends prior vent Next time u'll be in a coma so u can experience life without ur adolescence// The best vets accidentally confused these rhymes for french and they didn't even know I was killin them from the bench// I left u a hobo wit no flow and I wouldn't give u two cents they should ban me for bein tighter than the screw of a wrench// My incessant injects could infect ur flows breath at infancy and instantly bring death with similies without sympathy// infinately my killing spree intimately bringz indignity infamously illegitimately while emcees innocently plea// U irritably meet defeat lyrically when I easily pack heat I do it strictly illicitly for every enemy with any beef// Any first word could kill like a death pill when simply standing still I spit cursed verses that in-check stay in debt wit indepth skillz// the way I stem sparkles like a gem with the power of ten I will never die am a legend immortalized wit spoken weapon... This is tight musik and this is the way I choose to use it u can be influenced or u can just be stupid or u can be like eminem and u can "Just lose it"// either way these rhymes will reach u inadvertently this is not just rap homie, this is rhythm and poetry// im freestyling in a cage but when I come out openly the adrenaline will flow freely through the smoke and debris... I keep writing while tryin to reach the forever sky one day I'll get by cuz these words will never die... hope it wasn't too long!! ************************************************** ******************************** open mic rules: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141490 leave ya link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 u have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back if u dont understand what is a proper feed back click on these links above they should help those who really dont understand and for those who is playin dumb u'r one step to being BANND from open mic...
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