sorry but im going with Babylon. Babylon won because his piece flowed, had structure but the desiding factor in all this he was creative and did more with the same amount of lines. Drama had good lines, structure, n flow. however there wasnt as much content as both were first person but babylon had more and looked at it with more first person. if ya need any more pm the kid...

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