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Old 01-20-05, 05:24 PM   #12
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WOW, what a battle here...incredibly close and Imma feel bad for whoever loses this.

Flow - Babylon Slight edge here to Babylon, just thought his stuff flowed smoother, with alot more internal rhymes. Just the way I read it. Drama flowed nicely too, just didn't have as many multis and such.

Emotion - Drama Extremely slight edge to Drama here. Lots of emotion from both on this, but on different levels I think. Drama showed the real struggle of trying to make it big, and wanting to help out mom, but then seeing that money didn't change things hurt real bad. Babylon did the piece perfect with emotion, not knowing where he was was scared, and with the way he wrote the lines the emotion showed.

Imagery - [i]Babylon[/b] Again extremely close to call. I was picturing part of Drama's piece but it was a bit shady. Babylon, had me picturing this dark place all the way through, and I was wanting to know who this dark figure was all the way through.

vote/ Babylon by the slimmest of margins.
 
 


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