I have to go with K no hate, but urs sounded more like poetry homes and I felt his more, he had more emotion in his topical and his strucutre was good, his opener is what I liked and I enjoyed reading it. But no hate tho homes just try lookin for vocab to stretch out more but u had it on some things then u lost me but k kept me all the way through it.

vt/ k

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